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  Angry Cage

I've been in this town,
For far too long
But something's nagging at me,
And so I can't move on
My days are crazy,
Like waking dreams
But I prefer them all,
To my night times of screams!

My body is a prison!
Why can't you see?
My body is a prison!
Encompassing me!
I am so different,
And so strange
So don't you rattle the bars...
Of my angry cage...

I have visions,
Of reality
Odd looking creatures,
A lot like me!
A mistress, a creator,
Who could she be?
Hers is the one face,
That I always see!

My body is a prison!
It won't let me be!
My body is a prison!
Encompassing me!
I am so different,
And so strange
So don't you rattle the bars...
Of my angry cage!

I confess I have a need...
A feeling, a desire
Burning inside of me!
I am starting to think...
That this is where I am supposed to be!
These things, they aren't the same,
But they are a lot like me!

My body is a prison!
Her eyes burn with glee!
My body is a prison!
Encompassing me!
From them I'm not so different,
Or so strange!
And it feels  so weird,
To be able to relate!
But you still shouldn't rattle the bars...
Of my angry cage!

jlp July 25, 2008-Revised May 25, 2009
©2008-2009 =th3krimzon1
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The original inspiration for this piece has since been deleted by the one who posted it, so I have come back and made changes to this accordingly.

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