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EverBlaze-Part 1: Forsaken by =th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1:



Forsaken

I am the forsaken one
Look into my eyes
And see what I have done
I am forsaken, the forsaken one
Look into my eyes.....
See what I have become.....

To cleanse the world
To purify my hate
To burn it all away
No matter how long it takes...
No matter..what I have to create..
The monsters in your dreams
I will
Make real
Just one more shot to go...
Hold still!
Just listen to my words
This is gonna hurt!

I am forsaken
The forsaken one
Look into my eyes
And see what I have done
I am forsaken, the forsaken one
Look into my eyes.....
And see what I have become.....

Left alone so long
In my sleep
Dark emotions drifting
Along in my dreams
My anger will keep
Untill the day
It is
Set free
The monsters in your mind
I will take and refine
I will do what I must
Untill the world that you know
Is broken and ground to dust!

I am forsaken
The forsaken one
Look into my eyes
And see what I have done
I am forsaken, the forsaken one
Take a look at me
And see what I've become.....

So loud...
These sounds...
It's amazing what you can hear
When you are trapped underground
Biding my time
Waiting for the moment to make things right
So many won't survive....

You have forsaken me!
I am the forsaken one!
Look into your own eyes
Because I am what you will become!
Fear me in your sleep...
As I watch so patiently!

I am forsaken!
The forsaken one!
Look into my eyes
See what I have done!
I will forsake you!
I will break you!
I will claim you!
And I will change.......
You


jlp May 7, 2008
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A friend of mine, Nanaki-E[link]
asked me to write something for the project she and some friends are working on. She will have to give you the details, Krimzon does not tell secrets:XD:
To understand this song, and the 2 (hopefully,lol) that will follow it, you need to read the outlines she has written, as well as look at the accompanying art. The art is fantastic!!
I am very flattered that she asked me to do this:heart:

The series is called "EverBlaze"

Nanaki-E has my permission to use this piece, as long as proper credit is recieved.

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~Nanaki-E:iconNanaki-E: May 6, 2008, 10:13:00 PM
Oh my God!
Thank you! That cannot be said enough! :XD:
:iconnewglomp:
:icongwomp:

:icongromp:

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"You know... you could use a little... adjustment. Just step into my office, and brace yourself, bitch!"
~Nanaki
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=th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1: May 6, 2008, 10:19:04 PM
wow..................
i take it this means you , um, "like" it?lolz

wowz i just got my butt gromped off!!
:iconnewglomp:

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Writers Block is my arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed. :matrixfight:

Quiet emotion is actually very, very, loud.
RawEm0tion Baby.
~Nanaki-E:iconNanaki-E: May 6, 2008, 10:19:34 PM
:XD: Yus you did. This made my week. :giggle:

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"You know... you could use a little... adjustment. Just step into my office, and brace yourself, bitch!"
~Nanaki
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=th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1: May 6, 2008, 10:20:43 PM
aw:giggle: im glad i could help in some small way.
is it really that good?

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Writers Block is my arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed. :matrixfight:

Quiet emotion is actually very, very, loud.
RawEm0tion Baby.
~Nanaki-E:iconNanaki-E: May 6, 2008, 10:21:18 PM
Yus! You caught her personality and overall feeling perfectly!

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"You know... you could use a little... adjustment. Just step into my office, and brace yourself, bitch!"
~Nanaki
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=th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1: May 6, 2008, 10:23:22 PM
<------------user is str8 dancing in chair!!!!
YUS!!!!!
:giggle:
happyhappyhappy

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Writers Block is my arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed. :matrixfight:

Quiet emotion is actually very, very, loud.
RawEm0tion Baby.
~Nanaki-E:iconNanaki-E: May 6, 2008, 10:23:52 PM
Keep going! :XD: Plzplzplz!

--
"You know... you could use a little... adjustment. Just step into my office, and brace yourself, bitch!"
~Nanaki
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=th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1: May 6, 2008, 10:27:44 PM
omg,lol, GIMME A MINUTE WOMAN!!!!:XD:

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Writers Block is my arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed. :matrixfight:

Quiet emotion is actually very, very, loud.
RawEm0tion Baby.
~Nanaki-E:iconNanaki-E: May 6, 2008, 10:28:32 PM
Mkay! :excited:

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"You know... you could use a little... adjustment. Just step into my office, and brace yourself, bitch!"
~Nanaki
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