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EverBlaze-Part 3: The One by =th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1:



The One

Under hooded eyes I watch the world
That I adored
Slowly burn and fade
Become no more
And I have forgotten what for....
My heart is broken deep inside of me
And yet I feel relief
Everything has been said and done
Now it's time for the final run.....

I am the one:
Who holds this world in my hand
I have come undone
Because of things that you
Wouldn't understand
I have lost everything
And I will take you all with me...
Into my misery...

Under hooded eyes I watch the world
That I betrayed
All while trying to save
I have unleashed my pain to try and consume
All the evil that men do
But my mind is not my own
There are times when it leaves me all alone
And I am scared of what I have become
And terrified of what I have done
After everything is said and done
I am the one

I am the one:
Who holds you against me
I have come undone
Because of the evils that I see
I have lost everything
And I will take you all with me
Into my misery

There is no turning back
I am alone and I will attack!
Everything, and everyone
To reverse this damage
To bring back my sun
And you will not be free
Untill I sleep....
Eternally

Under hooded eyes I watch this world
From it's pedestal, it has been hurled
Now you all lie down here with me
And now Me and Mine will feast
On your fear
That you feel when we are near
I will take it
All from you!
It's nothing personal
It's what I must do,
To fill this void inside of me
You must all die painfully
And I am the one....

I am the one:
Who commands this world to cease!
And all who come near me
Will suffer untill I find release
Do not stand there and accuse
It's time to pay your dues
So many of you will be gone
And I am the one...
Who gets to choose

jlp may 8, 2008
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Author's Comments

This is the third, and final piece of "EverBlaze"
The first two were "Forsaken", and "It Sleeps".

All these pieces were written for a friend of mine, Nanaki-E,
[link] She asked me some days ago if I would write her "something" for a project she and some friends are working on. To completely understand this piece, and the two that precede it, simply go to her page, and check out her writing, and wonderful art!!

This lil "something", turned into a great big
"SOMETHING":XD:

Nanaki-E has my permission to use this piece, as long as proper credit is given.

Nanaki, thanks so much for letting me share your world!!:heart:

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~Nanaki-E:iconNanaki-E: May 7, 2008, 9:15:22 PM
:XD: :D You've made me so happy in these past few days, and totally made waking up worth it! :XD: :iconnewglomp:

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"You know... you could use a little... adjustment. Just step into my office, and brace yourself, bitch!"
~Nanaki
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~DeathsDoors:iconDeathsDoors: May 7, 2008, 9:15:34 PM
Really nice writing. I love it! =D

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We all must love those closest to us. ~Vampire-Crazed:heart:~chocolatevampire:heart:~mydog-rox:heart:~foreverwithasmile:heart:~free-spirit148-)
=th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1: May 7, 2008, 9:19:58 PM
Thank you so much!!!!
you have no idea how much fun it was to write!!!:nod:
be sure to check the link in artists comments for the page and work of who it is for!!!!
im friggin haaappy,lolz

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Writers Block is my arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed. :matrixfight:

Quiet emotion is actually very, very, loud.
RawEm0tion Baby.
=th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1: May 7, 2008, 9:22:39 PM
aw....i really dont know what to say to that........
i wish i could tell you just how very happy i am to have done these, and how much your reaction has meant to me...but its kinda hard to see the board right now :giggle: :blowkiss: :love: :happycry:

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Writers Block is my arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed. :matrixfight:

Quiet emotion is actually very, very, loud.
RawEm0tion Baby.
~Nanaki-E:iconNanaki-E: May 7, 2008, 9:27:19 PM
:XD: Yeah, I know that feeling. ^.^

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"You know... you could use a little... adjustment. Just step into my office, and brace yourself, bitch!"
~Nanaki
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=th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1: May 7, 2008, 9:30:45 PM
and why would this be? is this same problem happening to you as well???
i admitt it: i was so happy, because you were so happy, i cried. so there:yum:

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Writers Block is my arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed. :matrixfight:

Quiet emotion is actually very, very, loud.
RawEm0tion Baby.
~Nanaki-E:iconNanaki-E: May 7, 2008, 9:32:07 PM
I'm just insanely happy as well.
Well, I'm going for a walk, I need to get some fresh air.
I'll see you in a while. :XD:

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"You know... you could use a little... adjustment. Just step into my office, and brace yourself, bitch!"
~Nanaki
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=th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1: May 7, 2008, 9:34:22 PM
YAYS!!! ok, ill be around

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Writers Block is my arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed. :matrixfight:

Quiet emotion is actually very, very, loud.
RawEm0tion Baby.
~Nanaki-E:iconNanaki-E: May 7, 2008, 9:34:51 PM
Mkay, see you in a bit!

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"You know... you could use a little... adjustment. Just step into my office, and brace yourself, bitch!"
~Nanaki
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