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This, this was such an amazing poem by :iconwerewolf-moon: .
I had to turn it into a song for her. :nod:
This is her poem, so you can compare them, see where my song came from.

I see the look in your eyes, All the time
The feeling of Want you cannot deny,
I feel your lips on my neck,
Your teeth scraping my skin,
Filling my heart with desire,
My will it begins to bend,
For your touch is burning my skin, Like a wild fire,
Only your breath makes it bigger like the wind,
and I can't look away from your hypnotic gaze,
All the things I've been wanting are blowin away

And of course, the link to it. :) [link]

Her poem took my breath away.
BTW: werewolf-moon gave me permission to do this. :)

*11-25-08: I changed the second verse. :)

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:iconwerewolf-moon:
I think I have died. :O Seriously this poem is Love :heart: Thank you for writing one of your great pieces from my poem. I feel honored. XD
:icongwomp:

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I never thought dreams could be reached, in till I looked in to the stars.
:iconth3krimzon1:
you are very welcome. :)
but its not just mine, :), it's yours as well, because i could not have done this without you. :hug:
the honor is mine. :)

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Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.
  /l、
゙(゚、 。 7 Kitteh!
 l、゙ ~ヽ
 じしf_, )ノ
:iconwerewolf-moon:
:O. Aww. Thank you..Gosh now I feel honored.
We are both honorable. Dun Dun Dun.

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I never thought dreams could be reached, in till I looked in to the stars.
:iconth3krimzon1:
:lol: :hug:
im reading it again, and wow, the flow is perfect.
this is so much better than "Believe" :XD:

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Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.
  /l、
゙(゚、 。 7 Kitteh!
 l、゙ ~ヽ
 じしf_, )ノ
:iconwerewolf-moon:
I love the flow to.
I like Believe to..GrrRawr.
I like both of them a lot so it's hard for me to say.
I'd love to inspire you again one day. ^v^

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I never thought dreams could be reached, in till I looked in to the stars.
:iconth3krimzon1:
>.> i see tons of inspiration in your gallery!

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Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.
  /l、
゙(゚、 。 7 Kitteh!
 l、゙ ~ヽ
 じしf_, )ノ
:iconwerewolf-moon:
:D. Awesomeness. I feel special. You good sir have made me feel special.

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I never thought dreams could be reached, in till I looked in to the stars.
:iconth3krimzon1:
:aww:
it was weird, ive had this music in my head all day, i was even talking to my friend :iconblackroseless: about it, and then i read your piece, and i went "OMFG!!! this fits the tune!! it does !! it does!!"

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Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.
  /l、
゙(゚、 。 7 Kitteh!
 l、゙ ~ヽ
 じしf_, )ノ
:iconwerewolf-moon:
That is crazy, it's happened to me before to.
I feel so honored. It's crazy. Glad I could fit your musical tune!

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I never thought dreams could be reached, in till I looked in to the stars.
:iconth3krimzon1:
:) :glomp:
it was...perfect........
i gotta get off ofe here, must go to bed. work. sux. badly.

--
Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.
  /l、
゙(゚、 。 7 Kitteh!
 l、゙ ~ヽ
 じしf_, )ノ

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